2nd Draft, Complete!

I finished my first rewrite of the screenplay. I am planning on several more incarnations; mostly for technical needs, but as far as the story and dialogue go, I made many, many changes (none major), but I am hoping it flows a bit better. I got rid of a lot of sappy dialogue and extended dialogues. I'm glad I wasn't going through this whole process and finding nothing to fix. Overall, I think I was pretty objective. I was able to cut about 3-4 pages from the length. Not too shabby. But there were some additions as well. Additional dialogue and action descriptions, just to make things a bit more clear. I also incorporated several of the suggestions I received from the folks who read the first draft. So thanks to all for your assistance. I guess I now need to make all technical corrections, and any other small adjustments before I move onto the next step; submitting it. Woo hoo!