I'm going to BEGIN to tell you about Baker...

In the past two days, I have gone through about 37 pages on a second draft of the Baker script, bringing me to page 64 (currently) of a 112 page piece; in a second go at it. What I find really irritating, is that I have to consistently change one phrase, over and over again. It's driving me nuts. Instead of simply writing (in the first draft--and admittedly, I write in a train of thought method, so I don't necessarily see this right off the bat), "He moves to the window.", I write "He begins to move to the window.", or "He turns to talk to Bob", I write, "He begins to turn to talk to Bob". This is on 85% of the action sentences I have written. I don't recall this being the case in Sid's Apple, but I'll be damned if it's not an epidemic on this one. Driving me crazy. Don't begin anything, just flippin' DO IT! Jeez.